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Old 9th November 2008, 12:00 AM   #3 (permalink)
flynx
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Re: Can't we just write stories?

Nope, you read it and are allowed an opinion. Both are good points.

For the first, you're quite right, a noise loud enough to wake me would have me unable to sleep too but (if I remember correctly) a phrase something like "feigning sleep he listened for enemies both real and imagined" which went in the edit.

The soft armour was to differentiate between leather and metal as no-one in their right mind (apart from Hollywood heroes) would think of joining hand-to-hand in full armour.

and the room is gigantic (which also went in the edit) a village meeting hall, court room or what have you.

Thanks for reading.
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