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Old 28th October 2008, 04:02 PM   #17 (permalink)
WafflesToo
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Re: Excerpt from new project

Hmmmmm... Actually the original intent was to describe the world (basically a broken platonian crystal sphere). The legends of the Thirteen are not exacly unknown to the populace, though most give it about as much credance as say, the existance of Satan.

However, if I put it in writing then the 'Squid is on the Mantel' so to speak. Perhaps it would work better if I were to rework the 'earth shattering kaboom' so as to not mention the 'Big Bads'?

Oh, and it was supposed to have a 'Midnight on the Firing Line' later in the story ^_^
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