Hmm! A very quick response indeed! I think this is a lot better now. (You will note a lot of Brian's words in there - they liked them apparently!
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In a world of magic and murder, Femke is entrusted with a vital foreign mission by the Emperor. The task appears straightforward, but the young spy quickly finds herself ensnared in an elaborate trap. Isolated in a hostile country, hunted by the authorities and with her arch-enemy closing in for his revenge, Femke needs all her wit and skills to survive. Only Reynik, a soldier barely out of training, appears willing to help. But with no knowledge of her true mission, Reynik soon discovers chivalry is a dangerous business.
What do you think to the revisions?