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Old 31st May 2008, 12:16 AM   #14 (permalink)
MetalJon
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Re: Water of Life excerpt

that's great - thanks for the grammar tips!

As for the gravity, I'd imagined some kind of device that generates gravity on each floor of the station individually (although I'm pretty hazy on the details!), using electro-magnetic thingumies... I don't know, they seem to get away with it on Star Trek!

I think I'd imagined the space stations being built out in space in a hurry, `switched on' and then just left.

I take your point about the`weight' issue of the atmosphere, sometimes I get a little carried away with my descriptions and they can trip over themselves a bit!

Anyway, thanks again folks!
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