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| You give us a jerry built space station, not even rotating, then behave as if it had Earth-normal gravity. |
That's sort-of explained a bit later in the story (which I haven't posted here). Quote:
| what's ony respite; the stations ? Or should that be "their"? |
I was trying to give an impression of the creaky mechanical systems working tirelessly despite their `creakiness'. The only rest that the systems get is when they occasionally break down. I guess this part is a bit clumsy and probably not necessary!
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| You say "it" was curious, then proceed to give us a list of very varied (and doubtless uncomfortable) objects. |
Good point - I'll revise...
thanks!