Thread: The Dark Legion (Opening) - Critique all you want
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Old 18th May 2008, 01:10 AM   #9 (permalink)
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Re: The Dark Legion (Opening) - Critique all you want
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Accused of heresy by the church, who's iron grip controlled almost all of the southern land, they had been hunted down like a pack of dogs. However, only now had they been uncovered.
oh that is great, can I use that? xD
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