Is it Show or Tell?

[mosaix]

Originally Posted by steve hampshire

Hi. I've started a short sci-fi story and I wondered whether there might be someone out there that has done the same and would like to team up with me to give feeback and encouragement(!) on a weekly basis? I live in Spain, in Barcelona.

Steve Slaughter

Hi Steve, lots of people on here write short stories and I'm sure many would be willing to help.

You could post some of your story (don't post it all) on the Critiques sectiion, most of the feedback is friendly and constructive, but I can understand if not everyone is ready for that.

Send me a PM to discuss this further if you like.

BTW - welcome to the Chronicles. Introduce yourself on the 'Intrductions' section to find out just how friendly people are around here.

[flynx]

Hi Steve, if you like I could give you a hand with editing, ideas and suchlike. PM me and we can talk.

[steve hampshire]

Originally Posted by mosaix

Hi Steve, lots of people on here write short stories and I'm sure many would be willing to help.

You could post some of your story (don't post it all) on the Critiques sectiion, most of the feedback is friendly and constructive, but I can understand if not everyone is ready for that.

Send me a PM to discuss this further if you like.

BTW - welcome to the Chronicles. Introduce yourself on the 'Intrductions' section to find out just how friendly people are around here.

Hi Mosaix,

Many thanks for taking the time and trouble to comment on this! YOur email was friendly so here goes. I'm not sure this text is ready yet though. You should get the attachment which is entitle " The Curse "

Steve