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Originally Posted by Threddy  A familiar sensation came over Toshu, the same feeling he had had when he healed Hacha
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The sensation that had coursed through him when healing Hacha filled Toshu again.
That is they way I would write it. It is not really the alliteration that is the problem with your sentence. As j.d. said, alliteration can be a useful tool in reaching your reader's emotions. The sentence you wrote doesn't flow very well. "Had had" is awkward to read. Of course, maybe that is just a personal preference on my part.
