10th May 2008, 10:55 AM
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| Re: Alliteration
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Originally Posted by Threddy  A familiar sensation came over Toshu, the same feeling he had had when he healed Hacha | How about this? Quote: |
A familiar sensation came over Toshu, the same feeling that had affected him when he'd cured Hacha.
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