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Old 10th May 2008, 10:37 AM   #1 (permalink)
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Alliteration

I have alliteration in my book, which I don't want, but I can't see a way of getting rid of it. Shall I just leave it? Or can someone help me please?

A familiar sensation came over Toshu, the same feeling he had had when he healed Hacha

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