[The Ace]

It's a reasonable start to worldbuilding, but the title has been used before and, as Chris said, you really need to work on your grammar, and your spelling leaves much to be desired.

You also need to work on plot and characters, I'd suggest reading a bit more, see how established authors do it.

Obviously, outright plagiarism is out, but reading widely will give you the inspiration and better grasp of structure that you need if you want to develop as a writer, not just for publication (that's a long way off) but for your own enjoyment. If you don't like your stories, who else will ?