[indigotwilight]

Thanks John. That's some excellent advise to take on board.

There is that problem of, "Is an author going to be fully happy with their work?"
I know, for instance, J.R.R. Tolkien mentioned something about wishing he had rewritten parts of Lord of the Rings well after it had been published. He saw things in his story that others, perhaps, did not. But then, as you say, if an agent or publisher does not like the prose, then there is not much one can do about it except to move on, and learn from the experience.


Twi