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mirinda · 9th April 2008, 07:30 AM

A words or two could be replaced or removed, it would make it less choppy. That's a problem I have alot. Other than that yes it does have a very obvious rythym.

9th April 2008, 07:30 AM	#46 (permalink)
mirinda Reputo Iterum Join Date: May 2007 Location: Missouri Posts: 261	Re: New Poetry Thread A words or two could be replaced or removed, it would make it less choppy. That's a problem I have alot. Other than that yes it does have a very obvious rythym.