[pyan]

Good start, as m'learned collegue Lenny says....with one genuine, un-telegraphed, and, as far as I was concerned, unleaked surprise.
Just a couple of crits..I thought that the first allotment scene went on a bit too long, and I was most surprised that Miss Foster didn't have more than two security guards, given the importance of what they were guarding.

So did I, Ace...and I'm sure I've seen it before, somewhere...