Interesting enough Ctg. It definitely pulls you in. One thing I couldn't help but notice in the "LONDON 2006" paragraph almost immediately, I suspect it wasn't your intention to name your character after an infamous American politician:
Tom DeLay campaign finance investigation - Wikipedia, the free encyclopedia. If you were aware, and didn't mind, or it was somehow on purpose, I apologize. Anyway, I see how this piece is related to the one you posted awhile back, and it's an interesting story idea. (I like it). One more question - Did you intend the dialogue:
‘Did I just saw a future?’ (?) Perhaps you meant ‘Did I just see a future?’ (?) That was the only other thing I noticed right off. Good stuff. 
- Z.