| Re: Ostni's Weave: Isaac
As a game-warden, one would expect him to be using a bow, of course. However, this scenario takes place at night and he would be at a fair disadvantage if he attempted to utilize archery in such unfavorable conditions; at least in my mind... though you may disagree.
I'll revoke my previous request. I would appreciate any feedback, grammatical, flow, plot or otherwise. I know I have the material for great writing, but I lack the polishing that comes with a full understanding of sentence structuring and grammar... probably due to my sub par American education. |