| Re: Malessar's Curse - first impressions.... I don't have anything to add except praise, but thought that I would put a voice to one of the "viewed" numbers you see next to the topic listing. It's good to know people care after-all.
I really enjoy your writing style. I honestly can't find anything that interrupted or detracted from the flow of the story and the mood you captured was excellent. I especially like the hook you used when he said "And they always get it so wrong.", really makes me wonder why it would matter to him. |