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ctg · 26th March 2008, 03:54 PM

Above chapter is well written, and it has all the elements in it, but I have to be honest, as above chapter reads like a Disney story. I do not know if it was your aim, but if it was, then well done. The young audience is probably loving it, I'm not. Sorry.

26th March 2008, 03:54 PM	#2 (permalink)
ctg weaver of the unseen Join Date: Aug 2007 Posts: 669	Re: Dragon's Eye, Chapter 1 Above chapter is well written, and it has all the elements in it, but I have to be honest, as above chapter reads like a Disney story. I do not know if it was your aim, but if it was, then well done. The young audience is probably loving it, I'm not. Sorry.