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he could tell that while the tracks had been made that night, the person who had made them had come this way significantly earlier in the evening.
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I'd put a comma after "that"
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The single set of tracks ensured Isaac that he only had to worry about one poacher
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"assured", I think
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showing themselves occasionally with their glowing abdomens.
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Nothing technically wrong, but I found the lesson in entomology a little distracting
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Other times it was bandits attempting to find goods to sell in the form of meats and skins with robbing helpless travelers being a beneficial byproduct of course.
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Needs some punctuation after "skins"; I suspect I'd use a semicolon, although a comma would suffice, and a comma after "byproduct"
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He stared after where the wolf had gone for a little bit longer
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he just stared after the wolf.
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He was up again with surprising speed for someone acting so uncoordinated as he was.
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acting as uncoordinated
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was deserving of the fullest extent of prosecution by the law.
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a trifle clumsy
As there's no need for my grammatical skills I just point out one or two little details…