Thread: The Hiring Fair
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Old 25th March 2008, 09:44 PM   #5 (permalink)
Jerico
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Re: The Hiring Fair

An excellent piece(s) of work there. I loved it and thought it was a great beginning to an interesting tale. I'd like to see more of it!!

I couldn't find fault with it, though I'm with Chopper on the Briggs scene, I definately think he would of reacted slightly more to the insult and deception of Tom and Jathe.

Post some MORE!!
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