Critiquing - and more "Ocean Black" tomorrow...

[Paradox 99]

Hi all,

I've been woefully lacking in my efforts to spend time critiquing other peoples' writing in the last couple of weeks. There's a ton of stuff here I've been wanting to read through so I'm going to try and take a look at a few in the next few days.

However, I've not been completely lazy recently.
Some critiquing is still going on through PMs or e-mail instead (as I'm sure many of you do too). But most of all, I've decided to start putting "Ocean Black" as one continuous story on a site of its own rather than in several separate threads here.

That doesn't mean I'm going to stop posting it here (unless everyone's bored of it by now). I'll be posting each part on Chronicles as usual so that I can keep getting all the excellent feedback from everyone. Then, once I've made the revisions following the critiques, I'll update the site.

Until then, you can check out the story so far compiled in one place here if you need a recap - I'll be posting a double whammy of parts 16 & 17 tomorrow:
Ocean Black.

Thanks all.

[Alicia]

Ooooooo 16 & 17 *hops up and down* I can't wait!